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Fotini Masika's avatar

Angela, your poem is truly astonishing. Thank you for sharing it with us.

And happy birthday!!!

Kim Nelson's avatar

Wow!

First -- the video. I watched it on my laptop, zooming in to get a really good look at the frost. the details fascinated me so much I had to watch it again, and then again. I felt like I was in a favorite science class. Thank you for that!

Second-- the poem. I find it hard to believe you wrote and posted this on the same day. Please tell me this is revision #28! It is so good. The diction and imagery simultaneously delight and inform. I mean... these lines!:

"to find us,

born

not as accidents

but artifacts

of the sublime"

💛

The turn is smooth as an icy surface and the last two stanzas speak to one of life's critical questions.

Stellar work.

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